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The Silver Kiss end re-writeMy re-write of the ending begins on page 196, after this sentence: “ … He looked surprised. “But you have yourself. A good, kind, strong, brave self.  It was you who gave me courage.”:

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When I got to the house where Branko was staying, he came out the front door to meet me.  He hugged me, then took my hand.  We walked to the lake together.

“Tonia, I haven't been telling you the whole truth.  I love you too much to do this to you.  If you come to my planet with me, you'll be treated well, but you'll never be able to do anything but have babies.  You'll have no freedom – for the rest of your life.”

I cringed; tears formed in my eyes.  “Why, Branko?  Why ca
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He had a good job, and it paid pretty well, so he had every physical thing that he needed and wanted, but he knew that he would never truly feel complete without a significant other.  However, he had given up on finding “the one”, so he dedicated his life to his career.

One night, as he lay down to sleep, he felt especially lonely.  Right before he drifted off to sleep, he felt something.  His body
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Snakes and grasshoppers.

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A Special Girl

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Hailey, my best friend, had always had a huge crush on my older brother Andy.  He's two years older than me.  Tonight she had finally worked up the courage to tell him.  I sat beside her, hiding my slight jealousy.

"Andy, I think you're so cute!  Anna's probably going to kill me for having a crush on her brother, but I can't help it!"  

Andy looked at me, then at her.  "Hailey, thanks for telling me that.  It's very flattering, but I already have a special girl in my life," he said with a sweet smile.  He glanced at me, and I tried to hide the fact that I was blushing.

"Ah man!  I figured I was already too late!" Hailey said, not hiding her disappointment.  "So who's the lucky lady?"  Andy paused, then answered, "Oh someone I've known for a long time.  You wouldn't know her though."

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A few minutes later, Hailey got up to go home, since we had school the next morning.  As soon as she walked out the door, Andy took my hand in his and looked into my eyes.  My heart melted as I returned his loving smile.
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Yeah, it's a SHORT SHORT SHORT story... hinting at an incestuous relationship between a brother and sister. Don't worry, they're not kids (they're 15 and 17), and it's completely consensual.

I realize that this is hardly erotic, but I felt like it was closer to erotic than general fiction. Darn you Deviant Art for closing the romantic genre!! :D
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~Tsuikana Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
you should write more on this~~!!
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~Eclectic-Writer Dec 4, 2011
Thank you! I'm glad you like it! I may someday.
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~clonqui Jan 8, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like this cuz its cute :iconblush--plz:
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~Eclectic-Writer Jan 8, 2009
Aww thank you!! And Thanks for the fave too!
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~clonqui Jan 8, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no prob it relly nice :)
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~Eclectic-Writer Jan 8, 2009
:)
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~clonqui Jan 9, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:icongivemesmilesplz:
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